My group decided that both my compositions were very obvious, and easy to tell which was periodic and which was playful. The meaning of both was very successful.
My playful composition, they said, had closure and was asymmetrical. The fact that it was off center worked well with the frame, and that it looked like the were really sitting on the frame. The positive/negative space was off balance, but that was ok.
As for my periodic, it had symmetry, and was symmetrical. It was centered well, and was clean. I do, however, need to fix the marker a little because there was a small area where the space was uneven.
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