My teammates decided that I could have done a lot better on this than I did. As far as the dots themselves go, I could have showed a lot more progression in their elevation. They should have been crafted a little bit neater- perhaps a film canister for the large one would be better to use? The continuance in the dots is good, however someone did comment that maybe it would have been better if, rather than having the distance between each dot relatively the same, the distance between each dot was also a progressive thing. The similarity in size was good.
As for the texture background, the team decided that it was not the best background to use. The text was too haphazard, and some areas pulled away from itself, creating a distraction. The title was also distracting. They would have preferred a background that followed the path more, such as my large text background or sloped one.
The presentation, however, was neat, if a slight bit crooked.
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